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  1. thelonelyauthorblog says

    Your description of this guy was so poetic. Sorry, for focusing on that detail, but being a writer I can’t tell you how good it was. You ever thought of writing fiction.

    • LauraJ says

      I’m a writer as well but I write women’s articles and blog for a brand etc, I’ve never written anything like this. I really want to write a book and I guess this was me testing the waters.
      I’m worried about writing fiction because I think my best work stems from what I know. It’s tricky for me to create characters.
      No need to apologise either. I really appreciate your input 🙂

    • LauraJ says

      It is entirely real a part from that I’m now single…haha a girl can dream! I just knew I wanted to write a short story and had no idea where to take it.
      I’m so grateful you liked it though, because it’s given me confidence to write more and explore the idea of a book. xxx

  2. K.M. Sutton says

    I loved this! Such beautiful writing and also very relatable. I was in a relationship similar to what you wrote about. It didn’t work, mostly because we were in such different places at the time, but I always wonder what might have been, especially now as a newly single gal. Thanks for sharing beauty! <3

    • LauraJ says

      It’s so easy to think what if right! I usually think about a situation and work out all the potential story lines that could have happened.
      It means a lot that you read! I’ve never posted anything like this before and wasn’t sure the kind of direction to take it. x

      • K.M. Sutton says

        It really is! What ifs can really sink us!
        Haha I do the same thing! Probably why I am single again lol.
        Awe I am so glad! I enjoyed it and as I said related to this! You are a beautiful writer! Keep at it! <3

        • LauraJ says

          Thank you and likewise! What I’ve read of your work so far always makes me think and is really well-written 🙂

  3. Lise says

    I love your way of writing.. I usually find any stories of love to be awfully cliché or very slow paced but this was something different, I liked it a lot!

    • LauraJ says

      Thank you Lise! It wasn’t suppose to be all about love but as I kept writing, that’s all I could think about. Some love stories can be really cheesy right – like they met in Paris and went for a moonlight walk…

  4. Beyoutiful says

    Omg, love this! Always adore your style of writing and love how you described every single line of this lovely story. You’re so talented girl <3

    • LauraJ says

      Thank you!!!! This was like a mini experiment because I can’t seem to get started on my e book or the direction to take it.
      Your words mean everything and I will try to remember them when I begin writing a story line again! xx